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Prey
Eyes pierce
as you are observing me,
waiting for the right moment to attack.
Your invading tongue searches me
as you are surrounding in circles,
trying to discover cold sweat.
Lethal canine teeth shake my defense
as you grin devilishly,
expecting a wrong word
- a wrong move.
Your pulsing body squeezes me
- tightening its grasp,
pushing me to give in.
Fangs will end my life
as soon as I tell you that
I do not love you.
Eyes pierce
as you are observing me,
waiting for the right moment to attack.
Your invading tongue searches me
as you are surrounding in circles,
trying to discover cold sweat.
Lethal canine teeth shake my defense
as you grin devilishly,
expecting a wrong word
- a wrong move.
Your pulsing body squeezes me
- tightening its grasp,
pushing me to give in.
Fangs will end my life
as soon as I tell you that
I do not love you.
You're in a relationship with somebody you don't love but you think s/he will possibly find out soon or you will have to tell him/her.
Enjoy
Edited: 10/03/07
There were a lot of "me"s, "my"s, "you"s and "your"s. I slightly changed some other lines too.
Enjoy
Edited: 10/03/07
There were a lot of "me"s, "my"s, "you"s and "your"s. I slightly changed some other lines too.
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I'm personally terrified of the mere mention of snakes, but this poem is just so well-worded and put together. I really liked how you made it seem, visually. The concept of feeling nervous or even despaired when it comes to such a topic. Well done!