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Vitalizing dew to my feet,
glow worms around my thoughtless head.
They guide me the way -away.
A dark cool coat embraces me,
surrounding my body with black velvet
swallowing my fear, my fright.
The musicians of night call restlessly,
inviting me to their performance,
to a pleasant place of warmth and joy.
Gemstone eyes pursue my walking,
hidden behind gloomy trees,
murmuring words of foreign languages.
I am a petty part of this frisk,
this mystic and ancient affair,
taking place once every millennium.
The stars sentry over it all,
as fairies of eternal beauty
whisper secrets of wisdom.
They gently grab my hand
pulling me off a glade, alight, and
I disappear into the nocturnal forest.















Devious Comments
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If all God did was save your soul, wouldn't it be enough?
If you don't come by the way of the cross, you will never come at all.
SO MYSTIC AND FULL OF FEAR.
I REALLY ENJOYED IT!
hugs, lisa
I find it interesting that you find fear in there.
All I've seen it so far was the careful feeling for the unknown.
But I love that poems can influence people in individual ways.
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If all God did was save your soul, wouldn't it be enough?
If you don't come by the way of the cross, you will never come at all.
veri well done.. it reminds me of the song lady rosenred from lake of tears... i think u should listen to it!
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from green to red our days pass by
waiting for a sign to tell us why
are we dancing all alone?
collect some stars to shine for you,
in such a day they´re only a few
a sign of trust, my friend
(In Flames - Trigger)
And I have to thank you sooo much for leaving such a nice comment. I'm glad that I reach my goal to improve from poem to poem sometimes.
Thanks for the fav!
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