[x]

deviantART

 


Entry

Vitalizing dew to my feet,
glow worms around my thoughtless head.
They guide me the way -away.

A dark cool coat embraces me,
surrounding my body with black velvet
swallowing my fear, my fright.

The musicians of night call restlessly,
inviting me to their performance,
to a pleasant place of warmth and joy.

Gemstone eyes pursue my walking,
hidden behind gloomy trees,
murmuring words of foreign languages.

I am a petty part of this frisk,
this mystic and ancient affair,
taking place once every millennium.

The stars sentry over it all,
as fairies of eternal beauty
whisper secrets of wisdom.

They gently grab my hand
pulling me off a glade, alight, and
I disappear into the nocturnal forest.
©2007-2009 ~FelixT
Details
Submitted: January 15, 2007
File Size: 961 bytes
Image Size: 0 bytes
Resolution: 0×0
Comments: 25
Favourites & Collections: 6 [who?]

Views
Total: 176
Today: 0

Downloads
Total: 1
Today: 0

Thumb

Author's Comments

This is a poem I wrote for the Fairy Contest by *Lisajen-stock.
[x]

Devious Comments

love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0

Comments


Very good!

--
If all God did was save your soul, wouldn't it be enough?

If you don't come by the way of the cross, you will never come at all.
Thanks for comment and fav. :) :huggle:
The huggle emote did not work, so get this: :hug:
VERY NICE AND FASCINATING POEM!!!

SO MYSTIC AND FULL OF FEAR.

I REALLY ENJOYED IT!

hugs, lisa
Thanks. I am glad you liked it.
I find it interesting that you find fear in there. :)
All I've seen it so far was the careful feeling for the unknown.

But I love that poems can influence people in individual ways. :) As if they were growing and developing on everyone differently.
Thank you. *blushes*

--
If all God did was save your soul, wouldn't it be enough?

If you don't come by the way of the cross, you will never come at all.
okay... i didn't think u could do anything better than the last one i faved (Climax) well.. you proved me wrong

veri well done.. it reminds me of the song lady rosenred from lake of tears... i think u should listen to it!

--
from green to red our days pass by
waiting for a sign to tell us why
are we dancing all alone?

collect some stars to shine for you,
in such a day they´re only a few
a sign of trust, my friend

(In Flames - Trigger)
I've never heard of either the artist nor the song but I am going to listen to that one. :)

And I have to thank you sooo much for leaving such a nice comment. I'm glad that I reach my goal to improve from poem to poem sometimes.

Thanks for the fav! :rose:
Awww :aww: you don't have to blush hun. You deserve it.

Site Map